Tuesday, February 24, 2009

briesons promt that i stole because i am bored and do not want to go to bed yet

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I was walking home from school yesterday. It was a pretty warm day for February but the sun felt nice on my skin. It was the perfect kind of warmth that makes a person want summer to come. This however is all an illusion because no one really wants summer to come in Phoenix. I was suddenly torn away from my thinking when out of the corner of my eye I saw a boy drop something out of the passing vehicle. I wouldn't have given it a second thought but the dry wind blew it just into my path. I picked up the pace a little because that something really looked like something. It was a 100 dollar bill sticking awkwardly to the concrete ahead of me. I reached out to rescue it from it's wandering. I was very surprised and happily put the bill in my pocket and continued home. Once home I immediately took the bill out again except just in this moment it changed somehow. It happened so fast I am not sure I even ever had a bill in my pocket in the first place but at the same time I knew I did. The once bill now was a beautiful cardinal flying through my kitchen like a flash of fire in the sky. He must have been scared. I must admit I was a little shocked myself. This could not be happening. right? the bird flurried some more until he finally came to a rest on the edge of the counter I call the peninsula. I already thought things were strange...but I was wrong nothing was more strange that what happened in that next moment.
To be continued....

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ha ha ha ha ha ha! I love the word choice! Flurried!! Thats my favorite, i will say flurried 27 times before the sun gives its last light tommorrow!

Christy and Petyl said...

i am glad you liked it! this is my new thing i am going to slowly write this amazing story and the world will read and be inspired and one day this story will be shared with royals and the ...okay now i am just getting weird! tlak to ya later brieson Peace out (peace has the soft c in it-first grade teacher knowledge there dont let it fool ya!)

Anonymous said...

Holy Crap! I just spent the last HOUR writing my last post, it seriously felt like 10 minutes! Anyway I just texted you! Bye! Bye! GOOD BYE NOW! Good bye. Good bye!

Christy and Petyl said...

it tookyou an hour am so confused...did you change it or something..that did not take u an hour! whatever anyways was reading your libro today libro=book in case you were confused and i am to the part where they are singing at the hospital andthat makes me sad....bt i had to put petyl to bed and then trustan had to go to bed so the book is hostage in my room unreadable.... well bye now

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Okay, while I was comment raiding your comment page, I was thinking: I want to do video blogs now!! I think of a good one! Dont you worry 'bout a thing!

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